Monday, June 05, 2006

Love Story - Chapter - II (Final)

I suggest dear readers to go through the first chapter again before reading further.
Read first chapter here ==>CHAPTER - I




CHAPTER - II (Final)


We were in his mind,
Before time existed,
One day he created us,
He loved us so much.

He gave everything we asked,
He did everything we asked,
He fought for us against evil,
He gave many things which we never asked.

We smiled with him,
We ate with him,
We sang with him,
We danced with him.

Centuries went by; our mind changed a lot,
We didn't turn back, we felt bored with him,
He offered us friendship, we worshiped his creations,
We felt his love as a jail for our lust.

He never asked anything back,
But wished we talked with him,
Never had he wished, we do something back,
But he wished for ever, we are friends for ever.

He forgot his angels, forgot his almighty resemblance,
He emptied himself, reincarnated as a human,
He begged against evil, we beat him,
He cried against our lust, we never listened.

He felt pain for us, we never knew,
He was humiliated max, we never cared,
Offered his blood & flesh, we turned our face,
We crucified him, so that no more disturbances.


Up in the heaven, in his magnificent house,
Up in the heaven, ever waiting for us,
He forgave everything, forgot the piercing pain,
He wants us to be glorified as him,
Because HE IS LOVE.

3 comments:

  1. Hi,
    u made us wait long for this...
    good creation..hope everyone who reads this understands what is love????
    hope we can live a life filled with love and hope??
    Does this fast life give us a chance for that??
    values of relations diminishing fastly..
    value of love doesn't matter to anyone...
    what we are upto??

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  2. Never expect a twist like this in second chapter...It was gud..

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  3. Thanks to all who read and commented on this and the first part. Many of you who commented on the first part asked me who is the lucky girl. Many of my firends mailed me, called me and asked the same, and some asked whether I am into anykind of trouble not ready to give up.. The lucky girls are we, the entire human race. We have been loved so much by the God who never wishes to take revenge but just love us inspite of all the cruel things we do in the earth towards our fellow beings as well as to ourselves. When we do something bad to ourself, we are doing against the Almighty. God is within us (Prana)

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